Monday, October 4, 2010

Outline for Essay 2

Introduction:
 -A father is the most important male in a girl's life
 -Girls with fathers differ from girls with fathers
Thesis:
 Girls who grew up without a father in their life will differ when compared to girls who grew up with a father in their life in their relationships, their success, and their levels of self-esteem.
Body Paragraph 1: Relationships
 -A fathers interactions with his daughter set her up for how she will relate to toher men and also develop an idea of what she will expect form other relationships (Meeker). (topic sentence)
 -Girls who grew up with their fathers:
        -their relationships with other males
        -more likely to be in unhealthy relationships
-Girls who grew up with their fathers:
         -their relationships with other males
         -more likely to be in healthy relationships
Body Paragraph 2: Success
-Girls who grew up without a father:
      -success in school is lower
      -success in a career/profession
-Girls who grew up with a father:
      -success in school is greater
      -success in career/profession
Body Paragraph 3: Self-esteem
 -Girls who grew up without a father:
       -levels of self-esteem
-Girls who grew up with a father:
      -levels of self-esteem
Conclusion

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